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Madness

The giants appear When winter skies clear To combat the march The battle is here Bearing the lance As the drive to advance Through the war of the floor And of four takes their stance And only one thing To acquire the Ring Of the giant that triumphs And calls himself King

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Date: 2/6/2017 7:28:00 PM
Rightly wrote rhyme. I like it, Andrew.
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Date: 2/5/2017 3:16:00 PM
The war of the floor! What imagery. Great.
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Date: 1/29/2017 2:01:00 PM
SPLENDID
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Date: 1/28/2017 2:05:00 PM
Sorry for typo, (fro) I meant, great write, I especially like the part when you said,"only one thing To acquire the Ring of the giant that triumphs and calls himself King." if we stand for what we believe and let nothing stop us from pursuing our dreams then nothing will be impossible for us.
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Date: 1/28/2017 2:02:00 PM
Great write, I especially like the part when you said,"only one thing To acquire the Ring of the giant that triumphs and calls himself King." if we stand for what we believe and let nothing stop us from pursuing our dreams then nothing will be impossible fro us.
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Date: 1/28/2017 5:10:00 AM
brilliant !!~phatt
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Date: 1/27/2017 11:04:00 PM
It's great!
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Date: 1/27/2017 8:57:00 AM
Beautiful poem beautifully expressed my dear friend, Cloudy poet
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Date: 1/27/2017 6:00:00 AM
That is so awesome great job
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Date: 1/27/2017 5:56:00 AM
awesome loved it
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Date: 1/26/2017 9:23:00 PM
Awesome
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Date: 1/26/2017 9:10:00 PM
Nice Tolkienesque flavor to this one! Congratulations on having your poetry featured! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 1/26/2017 8:19:00 PM
"The battle is here Bearing the lance As the drive to advance Through the war of the floor And of four takes their stance" Powerful words and Great imagery! I love the flow of this poem Well done.
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Date: 1/26/2017 8:17:00 PM
Excellent! "Only one thing to acquire the ring"
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Date: 1/26/2017 8:12:00 PM
Amazing poem... loved it :)
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Date: 1/26/2017 8:03:00 PM
Really enjoyed this read
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Date: 2/20/2016 8:15:00 PM
Loved it! Great write!
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