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Made It

I wrote this poem in my sleep In the darkness of my bed It could not wait until daylight came for the thoughts were pounding in my head I did not want to forget a word so I grabbed my pen and started to write To let you know that of all you did I ended up being alright. I write of all the hurt and pain The many night i wanted to die. But made it through some how I wrote this poem while in the dark To remind me of what i had gone though When hope was lost the sun didn't shine Because of the love i'll lost with you I did not want to forget the feeling The way i felt on that special day I did not want to forget the hurt I felt you left when you went away I wrote in the darkness cause i was glad Cause finally there was light and i could see That love is not as selfish and hurtful as you And i made it through some how

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Date: 8/22/2014 9:40:00 PM
another good read. your writing really pulls the reader in. thank you.
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Derrick Smith
Date: 8/30/2014 3:21:00 AM
I thank you for your kind words and I am glad that you find something of interest in my work
Date: 7/7/2014 10:32:00 AM
wowo writing in darkness must have been amazing its a thrilling one i loved it Smith Bryan writes @T.m.T
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Emmanuel Brian Oule
Date: 7/25/2014 5:41:00 AM
any time
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Derrick Smith
Date: 7/23/2014 1:55:00 AM
Thank you Bryan

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