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M O U N T a I N S - the Choka Style

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~Mountains~ (Double Choka) Over the mountains Sun shines in all its splendor Beautiful trees stand out tall Birds assemble there Eagles soar right to the top Wild flowers covers the ground Blue mountains stand grand Deers and bears roam all around Eyes can't get enough nice scene All trees seem to glow You can feel God's loving touch Breathe in enjoy all the view. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 October.11.2016 ~ Author's Notes : The " Choka " is a Japanese poetry form or style.

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Date: 10/11/2016 10:26:00 PM
Well done. Captivates feel for mountains nicely. Peace, Love and Joy.
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/15/2016 10:11:00 AM
Thank you ever so kindly John , for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D
Date: 10/11/2016 5:27:00 PM
The photos with this are nice but not near as beautiful as the scene your poem paints in my mind. Very nicely done.
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Date: 10/15/2016 10:10:00 AM
Thank you ever so kindly Chris , for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D

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