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A breath of fresh air, after the table was cleared we had poured ourselves, one last sip of wine We marveled a bit over the dip of the sun An interlude, before the tint had resigned to the gun-metal gray, and a time to reside Our solitude broken and it changed on a dime Unprepared for the guest, which came in a flash A gash cut by lightning lit up through the dust without even hinting, as flint hit the stone A grumbling sky, turned the blush trembling cold A roar of the wind, where a beast could be heard all that was peaceful, became quite disturbed Over rolls of the hills, it stalked like a cat a monster, of clouds, on gray bobcat feet with lynx-like eyes, and with billowing fur that spurned tranquil eyes, on the softer retreat A fierce witch's brew, uncoiled with wrath with wind from the breast of sage and the dunes Gliding in from the fields, to rage and to seize where pillars and posts would snap, just to please Eerie sounds whistled through the long window sills The peace no longer held calm or a still Angry whips with each breath, cracking fearsome with sound Pounding with rain, gnashing teeth, with each round Shingles turned loose to mingle with limbs The thunder, was plundering, and peeling the plains Rain gushing down, forging new creeks pushing fast rivulets and forging new steel We wait until the wrath has spent all it's worth With gusto, and grit, .... until a last final vent A tantrum with wiles, till the cat takes a bow The monster has gone, to climb to the hills _____________________________________________ For P.D.'s Contest: "Epic Sightings" Picture #2

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Date: 12/6/2015 3:42:00 PM
Hi Carrie: You really personified an epic sighting with your choice words! Congratulations!
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Date: 12/5/2015 10:00:00 AM
Intense and beautifully written Carrie.
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Date: 12/4/2015 11:47:00 PM
Carrie, Congrats on your "Epic Sighting" Love SKAT
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Date: 12/4/2015 11:32:00 PM
How lovely Carrie.. congrats on big win!
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Date: 12/4/2015 11:05:00 PM
Love it, Carrie, thank you for supporting my contest "Epic Sighting." Stop by my latest blog --Abandon-- if you'd like. Have a nice day. Love ~LINDA~
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Date: 11/5/2014 12:18:00 PM
This is all pervading monster forging new creeks pushing fast rivulets and forging new steel. An atavistic throwback the lynx eyes are all about. Thank you Carrie...I will be happy if you help me to interpret your poem. I may be wrong so far my feelings are concerned. Love...rajat
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Date: 10/14/2014 9:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Carrie, your imaginary is outstanding.
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Date: 10/14/2014 9:22:00 PM
Stunning write with imagery, Carrie, Congrats on the win
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Date: 10/14/2014 3:15:00 PM
This is so full of fury..I found myself holding my breath...congrats Carrie. BG
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Date: 10/14/2014 3:06:00 PM
Carrie, congratulations on your win in this contest. I enjoyed your imagery and rhythm. Sandra
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Date: 10/14/2014 11:24:00 AM
wonderful imagery and personification many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 10/12/2014 8:46:00 AM
Stunning images! You brought the storm to pulsing life.
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Date: 10/10/2014 10:51:00 PM
wow, amazing personification. I was thinking it was actually going to be about a cat, but this was a wildcat far more frightening! Debs is gonna love it (especially compared to my lame monster sonnet I did tonight. haha)
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Date: 10/10/2014 2:10:00 PM
Always a pleasure to read your outstanding poetry.You are gifted.
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Date: 10/10/2014 2:00:00 PM
Great imagery love the cat and the storm...hugs Tim
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