Lust

In a speck of time Instant gratification Vanishes entombed

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Robin Davis

Date: 1/1/2014 10:50:00 PM

Karen What a strong and powerful write in so few words. Gratification does not last forever, but while its here, lets enjoy it. Nice job Thanks for the lovely comment on my Pure and White poem.

Karen Anglesey
Date: 1/1/2014 10:51:00 PM

Hi Robin, thank you for the lovely comment. Much appreciated !

Rockman Pritts

Date: 10/18/2013 6:37:00 PM

Oh my dear Karen. I've come to expect so much more when choosing one of your poems. In my opinion, and it's just my personal opinion, lust requires more than just three lines. You've put it in a nutshell, but I believe it requires fore thought, action and after thought. But I agree that the after thought always remains entombed in our mind. Only to be revisited in retrospect with either joy or regret. But it can never be erased. I hope all of yours are with joy. Rockman :-)

Karen Anglesey
Date: 10/22/2013 11:30:00 AM

This one is meant for you to take it where you will. Thank you for your detailed comments. I like your perspectives

Karen Anglesey

Date: 8/18/2013 7:45:00 PM

PJ, thank you.for visiting

Honestly J.T.

Date: 8/18/2013 6:18:00 PM

I can relate to this. good poem

Sandra Adams

Date: 8/15/2013 4:04:00 PM

so many chose lust over love and it fades too quickly...oh but both can be as powerful as your words!

Karen Anglesey
Date: 8/15/2013 5:45:00 PM

Thank you for your thoughts

Debbie Duncan

Date: 8/10/2013 7:10:00 PM

I swear I read this before,,,, I don't see a comment from me below though ;} nice write ;}

Karen Anglesey
Date: 8/10/2013 9:22:00 PM

Debbie...thank you again...have a beautiful evening:)

Stephen Kilmer

Date: 7/29/2013 5:52:00 PM

Perfect. Kilmer

Karen Anglesey
Date: 8/2/2013 11:13:00 AM

Thanks :)

Shirley Candy

Date: 7/9/2013 11:48:00 PM

Excellent write..simple yet meaningful..I like it.. ;) ~Shirley

Karen Anglesey
Date: 7/10/2013 6:43:00 AM

Shirley, thank you for commenting :)

Zebedee Wilson

Date: 6/11/2013 4:15:00 PM

Brilliant. Well written and so true Xx

Karen Anglesey
Date: 6/13/2013 6:50:00 PM

Paul, thank you very much

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 5/27/2013 9:39:00 AM

very true well written Linda

Karen Anglesey
Date: 6/1/2013 2:46:00 PM

Shadow, I don't remember typing this and referring to you as Linda ... geeeez (embarrased face) :)

Karen Anglesey
Date: 5/27/2013 10:17:00 AM

Linda, thank you for the review. Have a great day:)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/25/2013 7:29:00 AM

Wisdom enhanced! Superb!

Karen Anglesey
Date: 5/25/2013 8:28:00 AM

Demetrios, thank you very much :)

David Scott

Date: 5/21/2013 12:13:00 PM

YES I DID COMENT ON THIS ONE A COOL WRITE THANKYOU FOR COMENTS ON MINE I HAVE JUST PUT THE OTHER SIX SINS ON HERE YOU HAVE SOUP XX DAVIDSCOTT

Karen Anglesey
Date: 5/22/2013 6:48:00 AM

David, thank you for your comments :)

Matthew Anish

Date: 5/20/2013 9:55:00 PM

Life is short - and as you point out so is lust. Stimulating work here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Karen Anglesey
Date: 5/21/2013 5:36:00 PM

MAtthew, thank you for pondering my poetic thoughts. I appreciate your comment :)

Poet Tacito

Date: 5/20/2013 9:12:00 AM

Mmmmhm...so well said. Lust is short lived, as powerful as it is. Excellently put!

Karen Anglesey
Date: 5/20/2013 6:09:00 PM

Drake, thank you for the insightful comment. I appreciate your reviews :)

Mario De Paz

Date: 5/20/2013 8:21:00 AM

Simply great

Karen Anglesey
Date: 5/20/2013 6:08:00 PM

Mario, thank you very much ...have a splendid evening :)

Jack Horne

Date: 5/19/2013 12:20:00 PM

thoughtprovoking write

Karen Anglesey
Date: 5/19/2013 12:25:00 PM

Thank you JAck. I appreciate the visit. Have a serenely thought provoking day :

Joseph May

Date: 5/19/2013 5:29:00 AM

great write Karen....best wishes...Joseph

Karen Anglesey
Date: 5/19/2013 12:24:00 PM

Thank you for the best wishes. Sending them right back at you :)

Seosamh De Burca

Date: 5/18/2013 9:54:00 AM

Excellent piece, I enjoyed this immensely

Karen Anglesey
Date: 5/18/2013 10:49:00 AM

Seosamh, thank you for the encouraging comment. Have a beautiful day

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 5/16/2013 12:49:00 PM

Ah a gr8 sublime haiku!sth to ponder Best wishes.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 5/16/2013 12:46:00 PM

Aha gr8 sublime haiku! Worth pondering

Karen Anglesey
Date: 5/18/2013 10:47:00 AM

S. Thank you for expressing your pondering thoughts on my poem. I appreciate your insightful comment. Have a great day :)

Audrey Haick

Date: 5/16/2013 12:46:00 PM

This is profound, Karen. Instant gratification is always eventually, followed by a huge "let down"...well spoken, Karen. Love, Annalise

Karen Anglesey
Date: 5/18/2013 10:46:00 AM

Annalise, thank you for the detailed comment. I agree with your perception. Hugs :)

David Scott

Date: 5/16/2013 6:48:00 AM

ANOTHER COOL PEACE NICLY EXPREESSED THANK YOU FOR COMENTS ON MINE THOUGHTS POEM DI NOT KNOW WHEATER TO KEEP ORIGINAL VERSION INSTEAD ALWAYS INDE3SIVE THER IS A PART TWO TO THIS CALLED FEELINGSXX DAVIDSCOTT

Karen Anglesey
Date: 5/18/2013 10:45:00 AM

David, you are very welcome. Thank you for stopping by ...have an artful day :)