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Lucy

~Lucia~ She is looking at me wide lovely eyes Am asking for a favor as i recall Our sweet sour innocent relationship That has endured the last few years I still recall that fateful night we met She was going home after a days work Twas late in the night and by chance We met as i was keeping vigil I escorted her home there started Our sweet sour relationship I told her a lie on our fist meeting She was elated to help me on the second She became too attached subsequently Lovely Lucia didn't like to be dependent She started pulling away me allowing it She is looking at me with those lovely eyes I do still feel them emotions after so long Am gonna miss her in the next few months For i so love our bitter sour relationship Which has survived the test of time (a dedication to Lucia)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/15/2015 7:42:00 AM
A beautifully, flowing piece, like soft ripples on a pond in summer..... Really enjoyed the piece! ;-)
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Lewis Nyaga
Date: 10/16/2015 1:18:00 AM
Thanks Teddy for enjoying this piece..Blessings
Date: 10/5/2015 9:19:00 PM
Dear Lewis Wow what a romantic write here, my passionate fellow, I'm impressed great job of heart felt inspirational work, the other romantic poets better watch out, cheri and thanks for the comment enjoyed it alot, cheri
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Lewis Nyaga
Date: 10/6/2015 2:38:00 AM
Thanks alot for the nice compliments and the esteemed visit to my page//hugs and blessings
Date: 10/4/2015 12:06:00 AM
What an alluring poem. I especially like the title. Lewis, it's worth the taste... Skat
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Lewis Nyaga
Date: 10/5/2015 2:39:00 AM
Skat am grateful for those nice compliments.. thanks once more// hugs and blessings
Date: 10/3/2015 4:00:00 PM
this is so tender and sweet. lovely!! and I enjoyed:-)
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Lewis Nyaga
Date: 10/5/2015 2:38:00 AM
Thanks Njeri for your lovely comments... they are appreciated//hugs & blessings

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