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Low Tide

The tide's out at present Means the water's further away There's a whole lot more Beach out there Than there was Six or even five hours ago Temporary real estate Suitable for construction Of the grandest of sandcastles Unobstructed sea views One hundred and eighty degree vista No permit required Its a longer walk to the water But not as far to swim As it often is This time of day It's thanks to the moon we're told Taking the beach away Every 12 hours For cleaning I imagine

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Date: 5/5/2013 7:42:00 AM
Good morning, GARY, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy your wonderful day. Always & Forever! **LINDA**
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Date: 1/4/2013 7:13:00 PM
Good finish. Nice punch at the end!
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