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Low Country Treat

LOW COUNTRY TREAT ^ ^ ^ ^ Plump shrimps, potatoes and corn; Glazed with lemon bits. Toss fish, bay leaves on spiced boil Dancing on taste buds, Low country treat… Reeling mouths Twist! © copyright ‘’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’ Contest: Low Country Boil For : dear Sara Kendrick

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/19/2011 12:37:00 PM

very descriptive this is. Congrats on your win.

Tahera Mannan

Date: 8/18/2011 12:02:00 AM

Your dancing on taste buds was awesome Nette. Many congrats.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 8/17/2011 5:28:00 PM

congrats on your win in the contest nette, a creative and tasty recipe :-)

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 8/17/2011 12:35:00 PM

Congratulations Nette on your win with this wonderful write, I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/16/2011 3:45:00 PM

Congrats Nette luv on your fab fifth place win in the contest with this yummy delight luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/16/2011 1:51:00 PM

Lemon adds so much flavor to fish. Your recipe sounds yummy, Nette. Congratulations on your win in Sara's contest. Love, Carolyn

Jack Horne

Date: 8/16/2011 1:33:00 PM

Many congrats on all your wins, Nette : )

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 8/16/2011 1:02:00 PM

glad I'm writing this at the computer. If it was on paper it would be wer with salavic juices and unrecognizeable. Congrats Nette.

Sidney Beck

Date: 8/16/2011 12:23:00 PM

N, I send you my sincerst congra but really I must say i dont share your tastes in food......I hate all types of fish(check with Carolyn) and corn simply doesnt agree with me..as for shrimps, they are my wife's favorites, but I watch only....i cant stand all those pathetic pairs of little eyes on the plate staring up at me making me feel guilty for boiling them....ugh !....anyhow, well done young N....( .....but still ... ugh )

David Williams

Date: 8/16/2011 10:02:00 AM

hey Nette, congrats on your win David

Gwendolen Song

Date: 8/16/2011 8:39:00 AM

My taste buds leaped for joy over this one, Nette. I believe lemon brings out the dish's flavor more than anything. Do you have a Filipino derivation of this dish?Reeling mouths, twist is a fabulous ending too. Workin on an entry for your latest contest. Gwendolen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/16/2011 7:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Sara's contest Nette. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/16/2011 6:44:00 AM

Enjoyed this one..Very creative..Thanks so much for entering my contest..I was so surprised with the names that went with the works..Sara

Olivia Huddleston

Date: 8/2/2011 2:24:00 AM

Awe, I love this Nette! It's simple, and I like how it's written. Great job.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 7/29/2011 5:45:00 PM

Dear Nette, I could say Good Luck in the Contest but I want to be the First to say : Congratulations on YOUR Placement With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOURLiege... HG ( Harry )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/29/2011 10:10:00 AM

Sounds a bit like gumbo! But I guess not. that is a dish in the american south and all i know about it is that they use shrimp. Way to go on trying out the contest. I still do not know what exactly low boil is. haha. Luv, Andrea

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 7/29/2011 6:37:00 AM

The aroma is wafting half-way round the world to me! Well written and nicely served, Nette! Good luck in the contest. Love, Robert.

Judy Ball

Date: 7/28/2011 9:44:00 PM

Yum! Call me when it's ready. Great job. God Bless, JB