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Lovingly Lost

Valley was vast View was the best Sun was about to set For prey, birds search to get Breeze was pleasant Passers were complacent Boys bath at a pool Crows fight like a fool Sun became a lamp Returning home were lamb Distantly heard was melody Thick forest was woody Sun surges to set Self was easy to forget This thought, surely shall last As I was lovingly lost! Above poem is adapted from the eBook “EAGLE EDUCATES ENDURANCE! AND OTHER POEMS ON NATURE ” by Mr.V.Muthu manickam. Copyright is held by V.Muthu manickam.

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Date: 12/14/2016 11:30:00 AM
Nice images ... Fine poetry ...
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V.Muthu Manickam
Date: 12/15/2016 11:12:00 PM
God gives chances to visit such places. He again gives, such emotions into us that comes out like the above poem. It is an actual scene enjoyed by me and was translated into poetry spontaneously. It is never an imagination. Please look for more. Thank you very much

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