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Loving You Deeply

Baby whispering echoes a treasure softly sweet words lingering Inside silently warms one single heart fully smitten sounds of waves deeply crashing Landing on sands warm golden deep beautiful paradise your beauty alone babe sweet Sunshine looking upon love your face honey a soul shines launches within a thousand dreams A swan of such regal grace warm rests her pure beautiful heart true floating inside clouds sparkling magic with a jeweled gem silver lining you 're baby cloud nine sailing blue wrote to 5/7/5/7/7/7/7/7/7/7/8/8/8/9/9/9 syllable count left a note on cloud nine smiling a mad sort of write drawing love from the soul

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Date: 12/29/2015 8:48:00 AM
LOVE.....love and peace to you :)) rating..
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/29/2015 11:06:00 AM
the same warmly returned
Date: 11/9/2014 9:30:00 PM
Wonderful, Liam! Reads like a free flowing love story. I so enjoyed...love and blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 11/9/2014 7:45:00 PM
This poem is so romantic and beautiful! Awesome masterpiece! Just sparkling gold from your loving heart and soul, my dear friend, Liam. Enjoyed it all especially the last line. "you're baby cloud nine sailing blue" A 7 for you! God bless! Love and hugs! :) xxxx D.
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Date: 11/9/2014 8:05:00 AM
This is superb Liam ! I also am unfamiliar with this form, but you sure make it work
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Date: 11/9/2014 5:48:00 AM
A treasure of feelings depicted in verse supreme dear Liam!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/10/2014 1:32:00 AM
demetrios you are so spot on dear friend i drew the feeling with the syllables heartfelt wonderful comment dear pal
Date: 11/9/2014 3:59:00 AM
I concur with Greg, beautiful. I am not familiar with the form but I very much enjoyed the poem.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/10/2014 1:29:00 AM
you know yourself richard trying out new styles using syllables smiling wonderful comment pal heartfelt appreciated bless you

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