Loving You

Loving you; too good to be real...was after all unreal!

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Date: 5/21/2017 10:43:00 AM

beautiful but sad one liner Sunita:-) hugs Jan xx

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 5/25/2017 4:46:00 AM

Thanks indeed it was in sad mood...thanks for the read. :) Sunita

Date: 12/13/2016 7:58:00 AM

I have a haiku somewhere on this same theme, so I can really relate, Sunita!

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 12/14/2016 5:24:00 AM

Thanks Andrea...there so much to write on this wonderful feeling that we human are gifted with...I'll find yours and read it. GL :)

Date: 12/12/2016 6:04:00 AM

I would say this is a great write. Very smartly you have painted the sadness in this write. Beautiful... keep on going.

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 12/12/2016 10:49:00 AM

Thanks friend. I appreciate you stopping by. G.Luck :)

Date: 11/2/2016 12:01:00 PM

Very sad, Sunita.

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 11/2/2016 8:53:00 PM

Indeed...Thanks Daniel for the read and appreciation.GL.

Date: 11/2/2016 10:25:00 AM

At times it almost seems surreal. Peace unto you and many blessings.

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 11/2/2016 8:54:00 PM

I agree..the flight is so high and the fall...Oh! :D Thanks for the comment. GL