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Loving You

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Loving You

Loving you is like a sunny day after a long night of rain
Not a cloud left in the sky; like magic, they’re washed away
Now sunrays slice through the stratosphere; all for my gain

Loving you is like a moonlit night when stars come out to play
Fairies dance in woodsy glens wherein brightest moonbeams stream
As happy fireflies awaken from sleep, at the end of day

Loving you is like sweet summer rain; to roses you are a dream
In spite of thorns that prick your heart you love me just the same
What more can I ask of you, than this gift of love you bring

Loving you is like the joy of spring, when all new life is gleaned
Vibrant green is the earth once more; her perfume fills the air
Whilst we take in with delight, her beauty, our eyes reflecting beams

Loving you is like the warmth of dancing flames, inviting us to stare
In quiet of night, with the world far away, I lay content in loving arms
Pure joy is overwhelming and my eyes swell with tears

Oh, but these are tears of joy
My heart is overflowing
Ill fate could in no way foil
This gift you are bestowing 

precious gifts
may last a lifetime…
is eternity too long?

For:  Richard's "Terzanelle (fantasy) followed by Questionku" Contest

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  1. Date: 1/12/2013 11:52:00 AM
    Annalise, Congratulations, a wonderful win*SKAT

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 3:47:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning spot Annalise luv xx

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:51:00 PM
    Annalise.. I'm here to offer support In Richard's "Terzanelle Fantasy with a Questionku Chaser” contest.. :-) CONGRATULATIONS (-: good night~ PD

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 7:20:00 PM
    Congratulations and thanks for your entry.

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 6:31:00 PM
    I really like this poem. I started my poetry writing because of love and I love to see great things written about love. Very nice.

  1. Date: 12/17/2012 4:23:00 PM
    Annalise what a loving write I must say. Words flowed easily filled with descriptive words. It sounds like a win my friend. I'll throw in a good luck wish as well. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 12/16/2012 3:17:00 PM
    This is amazing, what a talented writer you are, brilliant entry...

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 3:19:00 PM
    VERY nicely done piece for this difficult contest, the start of the first lines in the first five verses, 'lovng you is like'...good luck in the contest! - Tim

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 2:13:00 PM
    Nicely writen

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 11:40:00 PM
    Great job, Annalise. It is a winner to me. Absolutely love it. Good luck :)

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 10:48:00 PM
    wowowowowow, I think it's about the best one I have seen so far in the contest. awesome, lady!!!