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Loving Sprinkles

Tears rolling down the cheeks mournfully sighs falling in a deep lingering thought Whispering inside silently I lay a sheepskin rug of purest white upon the ground for you love me not ,want me not cause your heart I don't deserve The dripping honey from your moon cannot preserve the smile behind my pale pearled tears If I could reach up grabbing the moon smiling confetti stars sprinkling them all over you sweetly If only by magic Nor the diamond dust from your confetti stars can bring a twinkle to these eyes These eyes were baptised with too many holy lies to ever be disguised A soulful howl yearning salted lips cherishing you babe within every single teardrop that falls in your honor enchanting rising waves kissing each curl embracing fragrant beauty I'd rather let my spirit free to roam in fabled wonders that always end ' let not love be' I'd rather gaze in a nocturnal sky with no one holding me Cause I have loved with all I am and be To be betrayed,to be deceived to be the clown of gaia's destiny and now not you or any other,no one my dear No one will set me free written by Liam and Charmaine

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Emeka Offor

Date: 11/10/2014 9:21:00 AM

Great write. "If I could reach up....

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/10/2014 9:58:00 AM

smiling wonderful comment deeply appreciated thank you kindly

Timothy Hicks

Date: 10/30/2014 11:32:00 PM

Wow... one of your better poems, I'd say. You and Charmaine work well together, loved the contrast. Your last two stanzas moved me profoundly... no one but YOU can choose to be happy. And when you give it everything you have... that's what sets you free. "To be the clown of gaia's destiny"... this line said quite a bit. You compare to living only for the earth as a joke... there are much greater things to be living for :)

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/31/2014 2:27:00 AM

timothy there is a much greater things to live for happiness joy peace and love the reason for living this earth holds nothing without those in the soup charmaine is a blessing to work with on this piece she is such a talented writer wonderful comment pal bless you thank you ever so kindly

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/30/2014 12:09:00 AM

This is such a beautifully mastered write! Your two wondrous auras came together to form a tremendous piece of art! I really enjoyed reading this excellent poem here this evening! What a delightful poem, Great Work!!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/30/2014 3:55:00 AM

thank you russell trying to draw the teardrops together split down the middle falling for one love calling lovingly sprinkles always over something held deep beautiful in every living memory splashing with charmaines pen i thought wow really came together great have a great day pal

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/29/2014 7:15:00 PM

lovely collab with charms so scenic and emotive, liam.. this, i like!.. huggs

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/29/2014 7:28:00 PM

smiling nette loving sprinkles we really piled on the waterworks at the end we should of put great niagra falls lol thank you so kindly for the lovely comment

Gary Bateman

Date: 10/29/2014 3:03:00 PM

Liam and Charma . . . A most powerful and emotive write, but quite sad. I enjoyed your collaborative effort here very much. Most Excellent Work!! A FAV for me because I too like these types of themes very much. Cheers and Spill Ink, Gary

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/29/2014 3:17:00 PM

ah thank you gary dear pal those loving sprinkles really wet the eyes wonderful comment dear friend heartfelt beautiful deeply appreciated with a smile

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/29/2014 3:00:00 PM

Your ideas are always so beautiful Liam..It was a pleasure to collab with you.Your verses. were very inspiring.Thankyou!Favouriting it!!"

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/29/2014 3:34:00 PM

your words blended so very beautifully charmaine it was fun collab really enjoyed dear friend always a great pleasure jelling together in these writes

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/29/2014 3:11:00 PM

smiling tim no one holding me lol it came together a treat for us dear pal thank you so very kindly for the truly beautiful comment deeply appreciated

Tim Smith

Date: 10/29/2014 2:52:00 PM

A sad but magical write liam and Charma .....I'd rather set my spirit free...I'd rather gaze with no one holding me....Such powerful lines...congrats to both Tim

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/29/2014 3:24:00 PM

so sorry tim your answer has gone up the page