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Loving Creatures

The path to happiness is gone Blocked by the darkness where I belong Its face a beautiful deceit Its lips bring my wisdom to its knees I ache for horror to betray What’s left of my senses, I simply pray For passion burning through my thoughts And in her embrace I will be lost Her eyes: the mirror of my warmth Reflecting on surfaces of frost I barely understand my place That I am an object for her to waste My tangled reason can’t recall The thought of a future where I can’t fall And I will crawl as I turn back Into the darkness within my past Her words have torn into my mind This orbiting creature has her claws inside And now I spiral to the start Cutting her out, she’ll take my heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/23/2012 8:59:00 AM
Lost love; always a great subject for poetry and you did a fantastic job with this....Tangled reason - so nice!
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