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Love's Sonnet

A feeling that can’t be put To words. It has suddenly come Upon me. A tune to hum Freely. My heart is afoot For love’s game. Input Signals beating like a drum In my brain. This great maxim That we are easily fooled by those we love Plagues my mind. How to express Something I’d risk the world to say... But such thoughts must I confess! Or else be trapped in fear’s foul play! Oh, how love is a beautiful mess! Thus resolved, I constrain it day by day!

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Date: 5/12/2016 11:15:00 AM
Isaac, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Isaac Abinante
Date: 5/12/2016 11:22:00 AM
Thank you very much. I feel the welcome!
Date: 5/12/2016 9:26:00 AM
Isaac, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead...........//:) hugs
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Date: 5/11/2016 10:48:00 PM
Isaac, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Isaac Abinante
Date: 5/11/2016 11:08:00 PM
Hey, Skat! Thanks for the warm welcome; I'm glad to have joined Poetry Soup. Probably won't be on here too often, but I enjoy poetry nonetheless. I'm a 17 year old homeschooled professional landscape photographer! I appreciate art as a whole (music, painting/ drawing, poetry, rap etc...). I can solve a Rubik's Cube in 8 seconds... just a little bit about me. I thought I'd start posting some of my poems so that they're 'out there!' Thanks for reaching out! =D
Date: 5/11/2016 10:25:00 PM
Lovely write you've created.... :-) I want to say Awe.......
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Isaac Abinante
Date: 5/11/2016 11:09:00 PM
Thank you very much! It's the first sonnet I've ever written; I was inspired by my friend's sonnet!

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