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Love's Reward

Amid screams of pain You gave birth to our daughter Amid cries of joy You gave an angel new life Our passionate love’s reward

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Carrie Richards

Date: 8/30/2010 6:32:00 PM

What memory could exceed watching your child born? My guess is NONE !! Nicely done, Joe!! Congratulations!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/30/2010 5:45:00 PM

What a wonderful moment this must have been for you, Joe. Congratulations on your placement in Rick's contest tanka contest! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/30/2010 5:27:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest, Joe

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2010 4:52:00 AM

Congratulations Joe on your win in Rick Parise's contest "A Memory Of Beauty". Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/29/2010 8:54:00 PM

Oh I really like this one. abeautiful mmeoruy. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/29/2010 7:33:00 PM

Probably one of the most beautiful moments to describe for this contest! congrats on HM. Luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/29/2010 6:48:00 PM

Congrats Joe on your HM in Rick's Tanka contest.. awesome as usual... enjoy your honor with luv..

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 8/25/2010 6:08:00 AM

Very nice tanka Joe. Haha, I wonder if it will still seem like a reward when she reaches teenage times. I'm sure it will ~ Sharon :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/25/2010 2:44:00 AM

Beautiful write Joe :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/24/2010 9:14:00 PM

So true and so well put Joe.. all of us Mothers who know and have experienced child birth... a great piece for it truly is a thing of beauty.. good luck in the contest.. my entry is about my wedding day last Sunday.. luv.. good luck in the contest.. for Rick.. ciao..

Skat A

Date: 8/24/2010 8:53:00 PM

AWW IT'S A BEAUTIFUL GIFT INDEED TO HAVE THAT BLESSING~ ENJOYED *LUV ~S.K.A.T.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/24/2010 8:12:00 PM

Nuice thoughts on how you got passionate love's reward. Joe

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/24/2010 8:08:00 PM

beautiful tanka, just lovely