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Love's Presence Last

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way.. ..way back then.. ...years ago that day... ...we met you said there goes my future wife I was in the dark, I did not know you A stranger .......you.......were to me your sister...............talked to me you came by............sat with me love began.....it grew years have gone by love's presence last

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/6/2014 10:51:00 PM
Sara What a romantic and cute write. Full of care and love from the heart. Thank you for the great comment on my Three Sided Love poem.
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Date: 2/18/2013 9:30:00 AM
So sweet. Love the shape. Enjoyed, Sara!
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Date: 2/17/2013 5:45:00 PM
Very lovely....blessings to you both
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Date: 2/17/2013 4:45:00 PM
You are a fortunate woman--of course it is by your own making. I love how you added some shape to this for this special day. It took me a while to get here, but I made it.
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Date: 2/16/2013 5:29:00 PM
And yet it seems like only yesterday, doesn't it?...Lovely piece of work, Sarah...Love how you use dots and spaces to convey the passage of time...Hope your special Valentine read this too - Tim
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Date: 2/16/2013 7:02:00 AM
Beautiful shape, beautiful poetry and most beautiful love!
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Date: 2/16/2013 5:08:00 AM
Way way back, how rich are these words?
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Date: 2/16/2013 4:38:00 AM
VERY NICE
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Date: 2/15/2013 12:50:00 PM
Wonderful story, I am glad you know true love. So much better than the temporary love that seems so common these days.
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Date: 2/15/2013 7:27:00 AM
That was so nicely done...with a wonderful story, too.
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Date: 2/15/2013 5:21:00 AM
So sweet Sara.... Hope you had a romantic Valentine's day. - - Have a beautiful weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/15/2013 5:09:00 AM
Awesome write enjoyed reading your poem today! Lori
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Date: 2/15/2013 12:58:00 AM
Beautiful piece.
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Date: 2/14/2013 11:50:00 PM
I enjoyed seeing this little poem of your love life, Sara. I hope it was a special valentines day today as well.
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Date: 2/14/2013 9:30:00 PM
Nicely done, Sara! You did great with the heart shape. Love, Kim
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Date: 2/14/2013 8:56:00 PM
I am glad to have the love of my life here with me today! I just know it will last! This is a fantastic write that talks about this lasting love! I enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening, full of romance tonight! What a powerful piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 2/14/2013 3:54:00 PM
wonderful romantic write! Lori
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Date: 2/14/2013 3:01:00 PM
Sara I love this very romantic write...David
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Rachel St.Cross
Date: 2/14/2013 3:03:00 PM
................................ ‡ Yesss, Sara Is Such A Beautiful Poet, *

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