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Love's Lost

We awaken from within a tomb As we journey from our maiden womb Specks of dust within a storm Like a shattered symphony in it’s mourn Love's lost in the land of not Ancient ruins that time forgot As the serpent lays the road ahead We count loves layers that are shed In the gallows where we reside Love and fear live side by side We shake hands with destiny’s vine Where past and present intertwine The curtain falls within our sleep As love's lost approach the deep Can hope survive in the dragons den For these are tales of sword and pen. Jan.24.2016

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Bobby May

Date: 11/21/2019 7:07:00 AM

WOW W.W. your first poem is a feature poem of the week, how much did that cost and who do you have to pay, lol Amazing writer you are my friend! Little wing over and out!

Constance La France

Date: 2/3/2016 9:23:00 PM

Warrior, congratulations on having this beautiful write selected as a Feature Poem For The Week, enjoy the honor ~

Winged Warrior
Date: 2/4/2016 8:05:00 AM

Thank you Broken Wings...I had no idea...

Skat A

Date: 2/1/2016 5:56:00 PM

Winged, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~

Winged Warrior
Date: 2/1/2016 8:13:00 PM

Thank you Skaty Skat SKAT(still love your name)...I had no idea...duh...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/26/2016 7:11:00 AM

No, I am not a poet destroyer. The name just stuck with me, John... glad you found the right (write) home ... move over roommate ... I got a new poem up. Check it out....hugs....Linda

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/26/2016 3:49:00 AM

- John, a really great poem - Enjoy reading your first poem - Welcome to "our soup" - Greetings from Norway // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior
Date: 1/26/2016 4:42:00 AM

Thank you so much for the welcome...and greetings from Canada Anne Lise...and thank you for your kind words...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/25/2016 8:05:00 PM

Hi, John, thank you for the tale of lost love, deep write. WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Winged Warrior
Date: 1/26/2016 4:50:00 AM

Well what can I say...I'm lost for words...I've never been so much welcomed before in my life...I have found the right(write) home...thank you so much Linda...and are you truly a Poet Destroyer ?(lol)...looking forward to viewing your material...

Skat A

Date: 1/25/2016 6:30:00 AM

John, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Winged Warrior
Date: 1/25/2016 7:32:00 AM

Hi SKAT...love your name...thanks for welcoming me to this site...I'm medically retired...I'm into the Big Trio of expressions ...poetry,music & art...recently I haven't been sleeping much...so an explosion of verse has come out of me...I would like to share my poems with other writers and get back some critique...theres much more to say but I'll save for the poems...thanks again...