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Loves End

Grasping Every ounce of love you give me Knowing it shall soon end Shall it last me No chance Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 09.20.2014

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Robin Davis

Date: 9/26/2014 7:27:00 AM

Brenda Short but full of emotion, sadness, and a longing for passion to stay. Thank you for the great comment on my Two's Of Love poem.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/26/2014 8:32:00 AM

Thanks so much Robin.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2014 10:28:00 PM

I normally am not too crazy about this form. You did a GREAT job with it.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/26/2014 8:31:00 AM

Thanks Andrea, I'm glad you liked this one.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 9/20/2014 3:25:00 PM

At the end of the day I really believe that true love is more than just a passing feeling or emotion. I really liked the way you worded it and expressed it Brenda. Been there, thought that. I can relate to that feeling about love in general. Love your Cinquain! Light and love! xxxx D.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/26/2014 8:30:00 AM

Thanks so much sweet Dorian.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/20/2014 10:03:00 AM

Brenda...I know the feeling. Love...does it ever really endure? That giddy feeling? You've penned this well. Love is sometimes a decision...a principle! :) Hugs

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/26/2014 8:29:00 AM

Thanks Eileen. Glad you enjoyed reading this.