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Love's Embrace

Love's Embrace Pre-dawn light peeks Softly through windows Lightening shadows to gray Leaving silhouettes as eyes Open in drowsy heaviness Only to realize you observe Every detail in the quiet. A long masculine arm raises The blanket in silent welcome As we begin a well-rehearsed choreography of body meeting body. Naked breast to chest, we lie in love's warm embrace. Dark fingers stroke blonde hair As feminine fingers trace through a mat of soft crispness over chest. Occasional kisses rain down--soft; sweet As relaxed sighs whisper through our intimate cocoon of comfort. Deep contentment spreads With every swish and beat.. Tha thump- tha thump- tha thump- tha thump Beneath my ear as our hearts match rhythm. Two souls intertwined in the joy of being Commingled bodies At rest At peace As the pre-dawn light peeks softly Through our bedroom window

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Kp Nunez

Date: 5/13/2015 8:03:00 PM

Such beauty in this poem on early dawn physical intimacy, Janet. Sensual and tasteful. A 7. :-) Kim

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 5/14/2015 1:42:00 PM

Thanks you so much Kim! I'm glad you like it..and I try to be tasteful...but it is sometimes a fine line we walk..gald you thought I stayed on the right side of it! ~Jan

Paul Callus

Date: 5/12/2015 1:46:00 PM

Warm and sensual early dawn embrace; for some souls it's the best time of the day! Lovely and dignified poem. #7 // paul

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 5/14/2015 1:43:00 PM

I'm not a morning person, so it definitely helps start my day off a little bit brighter! Thanks for stopping in Paul! ~Jan

Thomas Martin

Date: 5/12/2015 9:47:00 AM

Simply beautiful, Janet! Loved the feel of it!

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 5/12/2015 11:30:00 AM

Thanks Thomas, was trying to recreate that pre-dawn calm and quiet, with a sense of peace.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 5/12/2015 9:44:00 AM

Ahem sensational and boy i can relate to such in early dawn snuggling with soulmate. But mayb cant write so sensationaly and express as superbly as u did. I enjoyd yor word choice too, 'cocoon, choreography and more. Kudos. Pls do review my latest poem too.

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 5/12/2015 11:28:00 AM

My day does not start right when he is not there. Thanks for reading!

David Meade

Date: 5/11/2015 10:24:00 PM

What a perfect way to greet the morning -- darkness into light, sleepiness giving way to all the possibilities that a day of love can bring -- I delightful write, enjoyed the warmth of the moment. 7

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 5/12/2015 8:45:00 AM

Thanks so much David!

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/11/2015 6:11:00 AM

Enjoyed this sensual write of yours this afternoon Janet :) enjoy the week ahead

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 5/11/2015 9:51:00 AM

Thanks so much Wilma, for stopping by.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/10/2015 8:00:00 AM

Wow Janet a wonderful sensual write loved the imagery beautifully done:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 5/10/2015 9:11:00 AM

Thank so much Jan! Hope you sre having a beautiful day! ((HUGS))~Janet