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Lovers Wish

A splendored thing the mind foresees Two lovers lay ‘neath the trees Embraced in each others arms Engulfed in each others charms A rich thing lay there before her More so than frankincense, gold and myrrh Such beauty lay there before him To love her is his only whim To behold a touch so soft and pure Like doves their racing hearts do soar Oh, to float with clouds so high Then lay back and hear each other sigh If I were her and you were he I’d love thee till eternity

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/26/2009 2:28:00 PM
Kat, you have the touch, to touch us much, with your awesome words, to be seen and heard, written so well, if you read they tell, what was in your eyes, there in my mind, to read your poems, of many kinds. Another lovely write, James
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Date: 5/10/2009 3:49:00 PM
omg, I'm gonna fall in love right now.... your words are just ... absolutely charming. wonderful!
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Date: 5/4/2009 12:57:00 PM
But for the syllable count this would be a beautiful sonnet... hell, who cares! ...it's brilliant as it is! Tender language and sumptuous images. I fall at you feet!!! Keith (PS if you have time, please take a look at 'Nightscapes; a tribute to T.S. Eliot.) Thanks!!!
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Date: 4/29/2009 2:59:00 PM
Beautiful! Please keep sharing! - darkpoet
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