Lover

Together we would be like a mass traveling at unheard of speeds like molten lava succinct we would be in love & when cooled we could be cups & craters to hold the tears & a mountain to dive down them in Our union would sound like one thousand birds giving birth to one thousand more & Viola! We would have many flying aways we would have eccentric modems words of wisdom a computer magistry at our fingertips a field for facts sparkling stones a fax a phone call to God A Friend Each other.

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Tim Ryerson

Date: 8/16/2014 5:04:00 PM

I am SO privileged to have been introduced to your poetry Megham...MORE, MORE! - Tim Ryerson

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/14/2014 10:26:00 PM

Meghan, :) Congratulations, on having your poem featured on the Poetry Soup's Home Page..... Always & Forever ~LINDA

Daver Austin

Date: 8/12/2014 10:57:00 AM

I Like your layout "We would have many flying aways" A spinning top. An hour glass. The layout stirs imagination. Congrats on this fine work being chosen. daver

Leslie Philibert

Date: 8/12/2014 9:48:00 AM

This is the best poem I have read here, you write well

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/10/2012 11:36:00 AM

Meghan the poem is lovely,good friendship. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Jodie Williams

Date: 2/9/2012 1:14:00 PM

Wonderful imagery produced, vivid. A great write