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Lovely God

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Lovely God

Note: Gail's first poem written
          First grade assignment

I love God.
God gives our bread and meat.
I thank God with a nod
For God's Treat.

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  1. Date: 8/12/2013 8:02:00 PM
    amen, love it to be simple which only the lord might reveal to one later in life that we might return,,,,

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 7:11:00 PM
    lol, very much first grade level, Gail, you captured it very well.

  1. Date: 5/7/2013 7:41:00 PM
    A riming tyke! Had the apple not fallen far from the tree? SeaWolf

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 8:23:00 PM
    Doesn't get more powerful than this dear friend

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 8:33:00 AM
    Shades of talent to come! love, Kathy

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 8:07:00 PM
    Gail, wow i love your how you posted this on the soup..i have say it is very cute,,, a very nice loving treat from your first grade heart. thank you for sharing :-) always~PD

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 1:29:00 PM
    you loved your food,lol,off to a great start Gail

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 9:05:00 AM
    If this was your first poem, then you were off to a good start.

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 5:02:00 AM
    Nr. 1 .... - well done Gail !!! - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox love // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 8:53:00 PM
    This is sweet, so your an old poet, I bet he gave you wings from the start Gail, thank you for sharing this hugs vie