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Lovely Dancers

Some dances last a lifetime Like the one between Dave and Sue Love has its own special rhythm Oh so beautiful when its true Hearts filled with such splendor We witness harmonious beat They move in perfect unison So lightly on their feet Some obstacles on their path They glide on by with ease A smile a twirl, a passionate dip It's these perfect moments they seize Their dance card has been filled Together such a musical life The closest thing to paradise To be blessed as husband and wife Dedicated to our friends Dave and Suzan. Happy 35th, you inspire our hearts.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/5/2014 7:13:00 AM
So romantic. It reminds me of an older couple I once saw on a dance floor. Every movement was in perfect time with each other as if they were anticipating each step the other would take. It was beautiful to watch.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/5/2014 9:22:00 AM
My grand parents used to dance like that but they were not in sinc in the rest of their relationship.it was still beautiful to watch them.
Date: 7/4/2014 2:09:00 PM
Nice Rick... They should love this poem... Enjoyed... Verlena
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/5/2014 9:23:00 AM
They did appreciate it.
Date: 7/3/2014 9:28:00 AM
What a beautiful dedication, and heart filled tribute to your friends. Such a lovely gift to give and share with them! They must feel so honored to have you for a friend, Richard.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/4/2014 9:37:00 AM
Thanks so much Carrie
Date: 7/2/2014 5:11:00 PM
so lovely Rick 35 years is good going my parents recently celebrated their 65th and even got a letter from HRH the Queen in honour of it, I hope your friends make there too hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/3/2014 9:20:00 AM
That's amazing and inspirational. My grandparents received such a letter here in Canada on their 65th as well. Very cool indeed.
Date: 7/1/2014 11:05:00 PM
I sure hope they see this Richard, its great, framed be a great gift!!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/2/2014 7:36:00 AM
We went to their Anniversary party and I gave it to them there.
Date: 7/1/2014 7:21:00 PM
hmmm, maybe not "Our" friends as in we soupers?
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Date: 7/1/2014 7:20:00 PM
oh gosh, i am gonna look stupid. There are two here married Dave and Suzan. Which Dave might that be? I am not sure I know a Suzan. Just a Suzanne and a Suz. this is really cute and I hope they are poets I know. I sure do know a lot of Daves here!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/2/2014 7:39:00 AM
You do not look stupid and they are not poets. Good friends of mine who live in Penticton.
Date: 7/1/2014 4:37:00 PM
aw that is great, my generation doesn't know the meaning of staying marries, thankfully there are those who do and inspire us to not give up during the hard times. Grats to them:)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/2/2014 7:41:00 AM
I think there are young people who understand commitment. Relationships are worth the effort and become richer over time.
Date: 7/1/2014 2:19:00 PM
how fortunate this wonderful couple are to have you and Mary for loving friends. You two also lead by example of true love. God Bless you all Love Mom/mamabear
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/2/2014 7:42:00 AM
You are kind mom, my sweetie makes it easy.
Date: 7/1/2014 12:52:00 PM
what a wonderful wish for a happy couple of soup, rich... you make me swoon!.. huggs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/2/2014 7:43:00 AM
Thanks, Nette. They aren't a soup couple but their love is worthy of poetry.
Date: 7/1/2014 11:25:00 AM
A wonderful dedication to a happily married couple. Great poem as ever Richard. Hugs Jan xxx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/2/2014 7:44:00 AM
Thanks Jan.hugs back.
Date: 7/1/2014 10:06:00 AM
Happy 35?th Anniversary to your dear friends.May many couples be like them.A lovely toast and greetings of friendship you have crafted Richard,you are an honest friend.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/2/2014 7:45:00 AM
Thanks Charmaine. ;0)
Date: 7/1/2014 9:38:00 AM
An outstanding piece Rich... They will be overwhelmed ....35 years is terrific for the times we live in now...regards Tim
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/1/2014 9:41:00 AM
Hi Tim, they are truly wonderful people, I am very happy for them.
Date: 7/1/2014 9:31:00 AM
Richard, your poem is beautiful and magical, yes a lovely tribute, well done ~~
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/1/2014 9:40:00 AM
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Date: 7/1/2014 9:14:00 AM
A lovely dedication
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/1/2014 9:32:00 AM
Thanks Eileen, they are a wonderful and fun couple who love dancing.

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