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Loveliness

Longing to see you again and again Only the hope of you seeing those eyes Vivid memory's of being with you Everybody else knows what I desire , however Living my life without seeing your smile Isn't an option I can abide Nothing compares to being by your side Even the thought of you makes me weak at the knees Seldom as love, brought me to my knees Seeing you so soon will be just like a dream. comp entry not sure i have done as instructed 1st go 12/02/16

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Date: 3/8/2016 2:40:00 PM
Thanks for the reply on the bottom
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Date: 2/24/2016 7:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this Acrostic rhyme! Well done.
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 2/24/2016 8:48:00 AM
thank 1st go
Date: 2/23/2016 12:36:00 AM
Very well written.. big congrats on ur win stephen.
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 2/24/2016 8:48:00 AM
thanks
Date: 2/22/2016 1:11:00 PM
Stephen, Congratulations on your wonderful "Loveliness-Acrostic" win. ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/24/2016 8:49:00 AM
you have been immortalised in poem ! thanks check me limerick out lol
Date: 2/13/2016 6:32:00 PM
If it is his standard requirements, I think you have done it right. Stephen. Keep up the lovely work!
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 2/14/2016 2:49:00 AM
thank you never knew there was so so many different types of poem lots learned from poetry soup

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