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You took my love for granted
A love many crave for
What were you thinking?
How about taking it all up
And pouring it somewhere else
Where love is appreciated 
Where love finds love
Where love is loved
How could you be so heartless?
You're so mean
I'm done here
Wait a minute, it's over between us
There can never be us 
Once together 
Forever apart
Just take a walk, go on
I hate to say it's over 
But you leave me with no choice
I'll walk through the door
Like nothing happened.

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  1. Date: 3/21/2012 5:47:00 AM
    Sometimes a break up can be very painful especially when we are feeling unappreciated. emotions well expressed. Two things that real love does for you, 1-never the need to apologize for your short comings 2- it is constant regardless of your actions Love, mum.