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Love You So Much

Is there something you want to tell me my love? Because I have some things I need to say to you. I thought we had forever that we would grow old, Together, and be looking back on a wonderful life. I am so angry with you and I want to yell at you. Why did you not listen to me that cold snowy day? But no, you just laughed at me and left in a storm, I was still sleeping and the telephone was ringing. Ringing and ringing and ringing then I answered. Now I stand at your tomb and all we had is gone. Your handsome face will haunt my every moment, And I want you to tell me why you left that day. Why did you choose to throw our life together away? I am so angry with you and I love you so much. ___________________________ June 28, 2015 Poetry/Quatorzain/Love You so Much Copyright protected, ID 04-685-147-28 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France For the contest, Is There Something You Want To Tell Me, sponsor, Judy Konos, Judged 08/2015 First Place

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Date: 7/6/2015 8:25:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your win, SKAT love
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Date: 7/6/2015 10:10:00 AM
Broken Wings, lovely flowing !!! graceful! Kudos on the first place win!~Olive ELoisa
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Date: 7/6/2015 12:10:00 AM
Congrats on your win broken wing, I enjoyed this!
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Date: 7/5/2015 10:41:00 PM
Wonderful write BW! Congrats on ur great win! A super 7 for this!
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Date: 7/5/2015 9:16:00 PM
Broken, Congrats on your win. LINDA
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Date: 7/5/2015 10:39:00 AM
such an emotional write - many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/5/2015 9:10:00 AM
Thank You for entering my contest.
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Date: 6/28/2015 7:43:00 PM
Filled with questions and emotions! nicely done ;)
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