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Love Was Blown Away

A summer breeze blew love their way With sweet caresses their passion grew Eventide brought lavender skies, as waves kissed expectant shores, sunset painted brilliant hues In silhouettes they strolled along As they watched the moon arise Soon they paused to share a kiss summer love 'neath moonlit skies autumn plucked the leaves from summer's grasp, and summer love was blown away love's brief season in the sun sails away on autumn winds
---- 8/17/16 Contest Name: It Takes Four Sponsor: Broken Wings

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Date: 8/23/2016 11:02:00 AM
Joseph, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/22/2016 1:27:00 PM
Joseph , CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest with this beautiful poem ~
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Joseph May
Date: 8/22/2016 1:55:00 PM
Thank you for my placement Constance...Hugs
Date: 8/22/2016 12:26:00 PM
Joseph, a lovely poem dear man...congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Joseph May
Date: 8/22/2016 1:58:00 PM
Thank you Laura
Date: 8/20/2016 6:32:00 PM
I LOVE this one. It's one of the prettiest in the contest, Joseph.
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Joseph May
Date: 8/22/2016 1:58:00 PM
Thank you Andrea
Date: 8/18/2016 7:59:00 PM
Lovely!
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Joseph May
Date: 8/22/2016 1:57:00 PM
Thank you Abdullah
Date: 8/18/2016 2:24:00 PM
- I enjoy reading this Joseph - A lovely poem - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Joseph May
Date: 8/22/2016 1:56:00 PM
Thank you Sunshine..
Date: 8/18/2016 11:51:00 AM
I have to agree with everything Victor and Alexis have said. Each poem flows so beautifully from one to another and the imagery is so lovely with a great sad ending... This is my fave write so far - into my faves section:-) good luck in the contest.:-) hugs Jan xx
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Joseph May
Date: 8/22/2016 1:56:00 PM
Thank you Jan
Date: 8/17/2016 10:39:00 PM
Hi Joseph, This is a good entry for the contest. It is filled with a sweet love. I loved your use of metaphors. Good content and it complimented very well.I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A Big seven: -) Alexis
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Joseph May
Date: 8/17/2016 11:12:00 PM
Thank you for those encouraging words Alexis

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