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love vs. love

love asked immortal love
which of us is better?
immortal love said to love
i'm sure that i'm much better

love said to immortal love
i have many lovers
immortal love said to love
i have one and no other

love said to immortal love
soon i think i'll die
immortal love said to love
your love is just a disguise

love said to immortal love
will i ever be like you
immortal love said to love
that all depends on you

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  1. Date: 6/8/2010 8:04:00 PM
    I really like this one. It was as clear as a bell for me and great message. Very good read! andrea

  1. Date: 5/20/2010 10:37:00 AM
    enjoyed made me think...

  1. Date: 5/14/2010 3:25:00 PM
    good write

  1. Date: 5/12/2010 12:29:00 PM
    Nice analogy John with two types of love and interesting conversation in your lines in this piece... so enjoyed your creative write and appreciate your thoughts on my Sestina today... luv.. Linda-Marie..

  1. Date: 5/12/2010 12:08:00 PM
    An awesome write John. One of my fav. Computer is back on line. Not sure what was wrong but it is fixed. God Bless Phyl

  1. Date: 5/12/2010 9:32:00 AM
    this is a good one to fits real good with my profile, love it,..p.d

  1. Date: 5/12/2010 9:31:00 AM
    lol, you are to funny John, your comment gave me a chuckle,..keep them up. They are welcomed, always a friend ,..p.d.

  1. Date: 5/11/2010 1:03:00 PM
    This monoku is outstanding: "immortal love said to love/I have one and no other"...And the final stanza it's just sublime, John!! Great work. Ruben.

  1. Date: 5/11/2010 10:48:00 AM
    Beautifully expressed, John, and truly one of your finest poems! I like to think that the love we feel for others here on Earth can be immortal as you indicate in your last verse. Love the reaches beyond the transition from physical to spiritual life may be rare, but I do think it can happen. Your love for your family certainly reaches the "immortal" category, don't you agree? We'll always love those who died while our love was still strong. Soup mail returned. God bless you, love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/11/2010 10:27:00 AM
    John,there are many kinds of love,yet so truely said immortal love is the love which loves one and no other,and is never ending. .Hope we all get to taste that immortal kind of love,great poem,John..Charma.

  1. Date: 5/11/2010 10:20:00 AM
    Great testimonial write about your faith...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara