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Love Story

I once loved I once cried I once died Love was like the wind My heart a leaf on a tree Blown away

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Ndaba Sibanda

Date: 4/22/2014 3:31:00 PM

Blown away by your beautiful poem. Great work.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/22/2014 9:38:00 PM

Thank you Ndaba!!! very kind of you

Kira Price

Date: 4/21/2014 6:39:00 PM

I love this! such emotion expressed beautifully!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/22/2014 9:39:00 PM

Much appreciated!!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/21/2014 4:17:00 AM

I love it when someone can capture the heart with just a few words. Your poem does just that! I am fav'ing this one. Mahalo

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/22/2014 9:39:00 PM

Glad you liked!!!!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 4/21/2014 4:02:00 AM

This prose for me projects two meanings.. Thought provoker in simple words... Nice one.. :) , olive eloisa

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/22/2014 9:40:00 PM

Thank you for those beautiful words!!! :) and I do hope I gave you a smile!

Karen Anglesey

Date: 4/20/2014 10:14:00 PM

Less is more in this one. Such a great sentiment in very few words. Masterpiece :)

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/22/2014 9:41:00 PM

Thank you, I have tried to say the same thing to the tax man!!! Less is more!!!

Cherl Dunn

Date: 4/20/2014 6:39:00 PM

Well done very beautifully done, thank you for your great comment on my holy father, and again happy easter. cheri

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/22/2014 9:42:00 PM

Thanks Cherl and I really enjoyed that write!

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 4/20/2014 6:18:00 PM

beautifully penned piece

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/22/2014 9:43:00 PM

Thanks Liam, any compliment from an Irishman is a compliment indeed!!!!! cheers

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 4/20/2014 5:39:00 PM

Nice; Sounds like the story of my life. Like two leaves that the wind picked up and while being up - the same wind separated them, never to be together again. Happy Easter. ... Lucy

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/22/2014 9:44:00 PM

ah yes the wind can be very fickle :(

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/20/2014 11:18:00 AM

wow, I love a succinct little poem like this. I think if you only show the last three lines, you can call this a senryu. By itself it is enough to tell the story!!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/22/2014 9:45:00 PM

Thanks Andrea :)