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Love Story

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Love Story

So this isn't a love story but a story between friends...
Who spoke every day and became fond of each other as they grew close.
Sometimes she thinks about being more; sometimes she’s scared.
Not once would he have been her choice, for love, or even cross her mind...
But lately that is what is happening. She’s falling…
 
She’s always on his mind.
He tells her she’s perfect even when she feels like she’s about to break. 
He thinks about her differences and they pull him to wonder, could this girl be his one and only? He’s falling…

She can’t help but have this half crooked smile every time he’s around.
He can’t help but make her blush when pointing out her imperfections, yes; her faults that he thinks are so cute. 
Their smiles are big but their hearts are bigger. 
She’s his sunshine, and he’s her sweetie.
They talk as if they’ve known each other since birth, yet it’s only been five months. 
 
This is a story between friends...
Who spoke every day and fell in love. 

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  1. Date: 3/3/2012 2:26:00 PM
    I enjoyed your poem Sarah, well written and expressive hope to read more of your work, love,vie

  1. Date: 3/3/2012 2:09:00 PM
    What an amazing write you have penned. I get this do much! Very well done. Michael

  1. Date: 3/3/2012 1:07:00 PM
    A great Love Story, Sarah -very cutely written. I like it. -Mohammad

  1. Date: 3/3/2012 12:16:00 PM
    A beautiful story Sarah.Honestly,I think this is exactly what happens between two `very`good friends:) Loved how you brought this to the pen.Have a grand weekend and take care,Arild

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    Date: 3/3/2012 12:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, I couldn't ask for a better friend. he's been my muse lately and I enjoy every moment of it. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. Love, Sarah