Love Song

I'm going to write me a love song, and each word will rhyme with you, it's going to be about me all along, yet it will have everything to do with you. and as I sing out loud the pretty words, you'll know how much it revels, as it will be super sugar coated, thick with sweetness you can't refuse, it'll prick your ears and teased you'll be, oh this love song i shall write for me!

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Suk Raj Darjee

Date: 8/12/2021 8:29:00 PM

Wonderfully expressed adorned with magnificent and emotive phrases.

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/1/2015 12:10:00 AM

This is a lovely submission, Dechen. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I hope you enjoy sharing and reading with us. Have fun. Viv x

Dechen Pelki
Date: 7/22/2015 12:10:00 PM

Thank you :)

Skat A

Date: 6/30/2015 10:38:00 PM

this is a sweet poem. SKAT

Dechen Pelki
Date: 7/22/2015 12:10:00 PM

Thank you SKAT! :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/30/2015 6:58:00 PM

Hi Dechen, this is a nice verse. I can't wait for you to write this love song and post it on this site. I too shall write a love song for my sweet love Nate who lives in Oregon. I'm glad you finally found the community you've been looking for.

Dechen Pelki
Date: 7/22/2015 12:10:00 PM

Thank you :))