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Love Raid

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Love Raid

Love raided the heart

And occupied my mind

There was no chance

But to surrender

For, the love army surrounded the gates

Hopes failed

Wishes shattered

Army encountered

Ceasefire was restored

I began to forget the hard days

The army again planned an offence

Where I had no chance of defence

From then on:

I am in a state of alert

Where I cannot avert

The sweet pain of love

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  1. Date: 9/27/2013 12:53:00 PM
    Very nice; there is indeed no defense against it.

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 11:06:00 PM
    nicely worded poem you got here ,,