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love or forgiveness

someone you love
is someone you hate
why can't we choose
its really not that tough

a loud voice says to be mad
and hold on to it forever
but a small voice says to forgive
and just love eachother

two roads split in half
which one will you choose
we're to scared to tell
because we're to scared to lose

anger flows through us alot
and we all hold on to it
why can't we just chill
and let go for a while

so which will you choose
love or just hate
you really need just one
befor its to late

dedicated to everyone  xoxoxo
               luv ya

Copyright © Raven Carr

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  1. Date: 1/19/2010 6:25:00 AM
    Raven, Feelings of love are so much more pleasant than feelings of hate. The "love" choice is the best one for everyone... I enjoyed reading your poem this morning. Keep writing! Lovingly, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 8/11/2009 6:01:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win with this poem in my contest, Raven. Thanks for your participation and hope to be crossing trails with you again real soon. Take care... ~<><

  1. Date: 8/11/2009 2:41:00 PM
    Congratulations on placing in the contest! Wonderful, beautiful poem. ~Trudy~

  1. Date: 8/11/2009 3:45:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Jim's contest Raven. Excellent write. Love, Carol