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Love On Track

She left her heart there, on the tracks, walked away, without a backwards glance. If love were true, then it'd come back. She left her heart there, on the tracks. Tied with ribbon of pale lilac, her letter of love, left to chance. She left her heart there, on the tracks. Walked away, without a backwards glance.
Paula Swanson 8/8/2011 For the contest, In The Afterglow Sponsored by Nette Onclaud Placement: 6th

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Date: 8/15/2011 2:24:00 PM
Many congratulations on all your wins, Paula : )
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Date: 8/15/2011 11:58:00 AM
sweet congrats , paula... i was beholden to your "tied with ribbon of pale lilac" and all... hope you'll read my new contest and see if you are up to it.. ;) huggs!
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Date: 8/15/2011 10:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Nette's "In The Afterglow" contest Paula. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/14/2011 8:36:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette,Paula
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Date: 8/14/2011 5:38:00 PM
Paula, Great to see your poem doing well in Nette's contest. Congratulations on your worthy poem's place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/14/2011 4:29:00 PM
Congrats Paula on sixth place win in Nette's contest with this exquisite entry my friend.. luv..
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Date: 8/9/2011 6:58:00 PM
Good luck in the contest with this one about that fear of loosing one's heart in love..Reads like a winner to me..Sara
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Date: 8/9/2011 5:24:00 AM
What an excellent take on the photo? Very nice and creative! Best wishes!
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