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Love Is of Time

Because love is of time, woven in the fabric where lovers dwell. It measures caresses like floating wings of butterflies and turns its clock hands with each melding kiss. Bound by slow movement of vanishing night, when the moon is full and mouths dance across the skin. Time chains lovers to its moors, anchored until the coming storm. When flesh merges with flesh, moved by passion, driven by hunger, searching for a sanctuary. As each chain is torn, a veil drops, revealing captured fires that burn within. Exposing a vulnerable heart, with all its scars, caught. Leaving a flickering shadow, where lovers once lay, exploring their dreams. Before being washed away by time's moving sand, that forever dwindles away. contest Hotsy Totsy 2/22/15

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Date: 3/9/2015 3:02:00 PM
There seems much going on here, but there is nothing specific. Much of poetry seems to moving into generalizations. What is interesting is that love is being considered in cycles with this poem: happy-sad-happy. Usually love poems dwell on love being happy forever. Good read. You think about text. That's good.
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Date: 3/3/2015 2:20:00 PM
Gosh, did this not win? It was such a fave for me! and sadly, I see no congrats here.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/3/2015 2:43:00 PM
thank you for the kindness and congratulations to you my friend
Date: 2/25/2015 7:00:00 AM
Something different from your sonnets... a passionate write Frederick... enjoyed it.. nad
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Date: 2/25/2015 3:40:00 AM
What beautiful powerful description of love .
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Date: 2/25/2015 3:09:00 AM
Frederick. I very much enjoyed this poem. A great deal of sensitivity and awareness flows through it. 'Exposing the vulnerable heart, with all its scars..' very powerful.
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Date: 2/24/2015 6:45:00 PM
Frederick. I may be seeing your best poem ever. this is just amazing. I have seen three amazing poems today and it's so rare for me to find three in just half an hour. FAVE on this one!! (sorry about your childhood. I exaggerated my childhood dream but we DID do many of the things suggested in my poem)
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Date: 2/24/2015 6:09:00 PM
Frederic my friend, what a beautiful passionate story, loved every written word, good luck in the contest, take care..........Vera........
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Date: 2/24/2015 11:41:00 AM
A lovers lovely write sir. God Bless. D.
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Date: 2/22/2015 1:55:00 PM
Nicely done -- may we always take time to love -- you captured the passion of love and river of times that flows always. 7
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Date: 2/22/2015 1:53:00 PM
Very deep and moving write my friend! Time, the friend or the villain, acts without malice. Yet treasures stored for a time needed greatly in the future(old age) are the gems of love, family and greatness! A7 and a truly superb write!
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Frederic Parker
Date: 2/24/2015 11:03:00 AM
thank you for your kindness Robert
Date: 2/22/2015 1:33:00 PM
- Words that makes sense .... beautiful ...... love how your last line speaks wisely, Frederic - I wish you best of luck in contest ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Frederic Parker
Date: 2/24/2015 11:04:00 AM
thank you my poetic friend for your reading and your kindness
Date: 2/22/2015 12:59:00 PM
because love is of time - such a divine line you said it twice- imagery is outstanding Frederic I am in awe of your creativity - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Frederic Parker
Date: 2/24/2015 11:07:00 AM
yes my friend time is the one thing constant with us all

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