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Love Is Like

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Love is like one petal, off a daisy chain. Its feels like a thousand butterfly's are flapping in my brain. its all about The laughter when your dancing in the rain. Your such a stunning beauty and she always entertains. My heart beats like a drummer who is high on speed. My eyes need to see you,please don't leave !. When I hear you speak my name I am always very pleased. Your touch caresses me, like a fresh summers breeze. People think I'm crazy, people think me mad. For carrying my love for you in my heart of hearts. But if you left even for one week I would be oh so sad And with these words of love I hope to sincerely impart. comp entry 07102016

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Date: 11/2/2016 4:19:00 PM
Stephen congratulations on your win in the contest with this beautiful poem. I loved the audio and music, you have a wonderful voice
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Date: 11/2/2016 5:22:00 PM
many thanks, broken wings. I use an app on my phone and play a you tube video low sound to try and create atmosphere glad you like it , I try to be original stephen
Date: 11/1/2016 8:03:00 PM
Beautiful poem about love, Stephen. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Sandra
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Date: 11/1/2016 9:48:00 AM
any congrats on your win, Stephen. Lovely writing. Lainey
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Date: 11/1/2016 10:13:00 AM
many thanks lainey glad you liked it
Date: 10/11/2016 5:05:00 AM
what a lovely description of love - the imagery is charming:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/11/2016 5:54:00 AM
cheers jan , hope the judge likes it :-) stephen
Date: 10/10/2016 3:53:00 AM
ohh, crazy crazy spin of love so alluring, indeed..very nice, stephen!..huggs
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Date: 10/11/2016 5:53:00 AM
many thanks nette glad you liked it stephen
Date: 10/7/2016 2:12:00 PM
I enjoyed this poem I felt my spirit lift while I was reading your poem.
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Date: 10/7/2016 2:20:00 PM
Thats very nice of you to say Darlene cheers stephen
Date: 10/7/2016 1:29:00 PM
Sounds like that pretty much covers it. Very nicely expressed emotions and affection. Well done.
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 10/7/2016 1:42:00 PM
cheers chris : Im sure the comp will have some amazing entrys but wrote with feelings we shall see

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