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champagne on ice picnic in forest is romance in the air drops to one knee ready to propose what will her answer be she shyly smiles gives him her reply will wedding bells ring out diamond sparkles third finger left hand should they ring their parents plans to be made venue needs choosing how much will it all cost big day arrives bride and groom smiling will their happiness last 10~18~15 Checked using How Many Syllables Contest Questionku Two Sponsor Richard Lamoureux

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John Beam

Date: 10/26/2015 7:08:00 PM

Congregations Jan on your win. I really liked how you answered with questions continuing the flow

Jan Allison
Date: 10/26/2015 7:11:00 PM

Thanks John i really enjoyed the challenge ... i just hope they have a happy outcome in life! hugs Jan xx

Balveen Cheema

Date: 10/26/2015 8:14:00 AM

Oh Jan! This an absolutely a romantic win! Love, Balveen

Jan Allison
Date: 10/26/2015 12:51:00 PM

It's not written from personal experience lol:-) I proposed to my hubby:-) hugs Jan xx

Estela Canama

Date: 10/26/2015 4:35:00 AM

Great and wonderfully crafted! Congrats, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/26/2015 12:51:00 PM

Thanks so much Estela:-) hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/26/2015 1:25:00 AM

Very beautiful n exquisite work Jan! Congrats on top place win!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/26/2015 12:51:00 PM

Thanks so much Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx

Rob Carmack

Date: 10/25/2015 9:43:00 PM

Congrats Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/26/2015 12:58:00 PM

Thanks so much Rob:-) hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/25/2015 7:49:00 PM

Hi Jan, back to read your poem again and congratulate you on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 10/26/2015 2:09:00 AM

Thanks again Sandra:-) Hugs Jan xx

David Mohn

Date: 10/25/2015 6:42:00 PM

Back for congrats Jan...I knew you would place well :) and congrats also on your impressive run of winners!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/25/2015 6:43:00 PM

I'm flying high today David... but believe me I still get my fair share of N/A to add to my growing collection lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 10/25/2015 6:28:00 PM

Congratulations in your win Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/25/2015 6:35:00 PM

Thanks so much Nayda:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/25/2015 5:03:00 PM

Way to go, Jan!! BIG congrats.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/25/2015 5:08:00 PM

Thanks Andrea I am delighted with my winning streak today:-) hugs jan xx

Arlene Smith

Date: 10/25/2015 4:35:00 PM

Congrats on top win, sweetness!!.. Beautiful Questionku!!...

Jan Allison
Date: 10/25/2015 4:44:00 PM

Thanks so much Arlene i was delighted to place so highly:-) hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser

Date: 10/25/2015 4:30:00 PM

Nice romantic piece, Jan! Congrats on your win :)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/25/2015 4:34:00 PM

Thanks Laura I enjoyed writing for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Ralph Sergi

Date: 10/25/2015 4:18:00 PM

Congratulations on your win of a questionable love and marriage. i REALLY ENJOYED IT.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/25/2015 4:29:00 PM

Thanks Ralph I really enjoyed the challenge and was delighted to place so highly:-) hugs Jan xx

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/25/2015 3:17:00 PM

Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Janice

Jan Allison
Date: 10/25/2015 3:19:00 PM

Thanks so much Janice:-) hugs jan xx

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/25/2015 2:49:00 PM

Romance is always a winner to me. Congratulations!! A Beautiful Qu ... CayCay

Jan Allison
Date: 10/25/2015 2:52:00 PM

Thanks so much CayCay today is a VERY good day for me in so so many ways :-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 10/25/2015 1:52:00 PM

Hi Jan! Always pleased to come back with congratulations...especially when we're talking about first place!:) Well done! We're keeping each other great company today:) Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 10/25/2015 2:02:00 PM

People will start to talk Paul lol :-) see you soon:-)hugs jan xx

Viv Wigley

Date: 10/25/2015 12:38:00 PM

snoggy. I'm buying a new keyboard tomorrow x

Jan Allison
Date: 10/25/2015 12:40:00 PM

ha ha ha:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 10/25/2015 12:36:00 PM

Inspirational for young lovers...Congratulations, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/25/2015 12:40:00 PM

Thanks Lin - it is pure fiction on my behalf - I proposed to my hubby and it wasn't a leap year lol:-) hugs jan xx

Viv Wigley

Date: 10/25/2015 12:36:00 PM

Yaaaaay! Was I right, or was I right? Congrats, and huge, rib crushing, lung evacuating, dribbly snoogy hug (pause for breath), Viv x

Jan Allison
Date: 10/25/2015 12:39:00 PM

ooh thanks Mr Viv - hubby is in the bath so he won't see me flirting lol:-) hugs jan xx

Michael Tor

Date: 10/25/2015 12:17:00 PM

Excellent win Jan for Richards contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/25/2015 12:18:00 PM

I'm so so happy Michael:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/25/2015 12:13:00 PM

My favorite is the forth one. Congratulations Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/25/2015 12:15:00 PM

Oh Wow Richard thank you so much for my first place win - I am delighted:-) hugs Jan xx

Dalia Shahein

Date: 10/20/2015 3:21:00 PM

Beautiful poem my dear, I'm really glad I've got the chance to read it ... :)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/20/2015 3:55:00 PM

Thank you so much Dalia:-) hugs Jan xx

David Mohn

Date: 10/20/2015 10:53:00 AM

you nailed this one Jan..marvelous :)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/20/2015 11:06:00 AM

Thanks David:-) hugs Jan xx

Eric Boddie

Date: 10/19/2015 1:06:00 PM

oh jan, this is Beautiful my friend....and I simply Love the way it ends....and it should last if they take that fateful step....and if it was TRULY done for Love then Love will be always kept....;)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/19/2015 1:10:00 PM

Thanks as ever for the beautiful poetic response Eric:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 10/19/2015 12:18:00 PM

Jan, your questionkus are so sweet and charming, a loving 7 and thanks for visiting my funny kids poem ~~

Jan Allison
Date: 10/19/2015 1:09:00 PM

Thanks so much Broken Wings I hope Richard likes them:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/18/2015 8:12:00 PM

Most of the answers are yes until we get to the last one. then it's 50/50 hahaha. These days anyway. Well done, jan. I am so behind on contests now. Can't seem to motivate myself. Ayyy.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/19/2015 1:13:00 AM

I struggle to write these days - maybe the apathy on soup is catching up :-( hugs jan xx