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Love How I See It

To love is like holding a freshly cut untrimmed rose ..... you would never want to drop or lose such a beautifil thing. so you hold it tightly,but the tighter you squeeze the deeper the thorns cut in to your flesh...you endure the pain until the point comes when you must losen your grip and in turn the rose falls to the ground but, as time passes and the bleeding stops you try to forget,but then you look at your hand and the scars remind you of the beauty that comes with the pain and you pick the rose back up.

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Date: 3/26/2016 9:36:00 PM
royston bedminster, you've expressed yourself well, I like the way you ended the poem. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Happy Easter ** LOVE LINDA
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Date: 8/10/2015 6:58:00 PM
ROYSTON, a wonderful read.... LOVE *SKAT*
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Date: 12/9/2010 9:03:00 PM
Wow, so creative, and yet so true. Incredible metaphor for love.
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Date: 12/9/2010 8:56:00 AM
I too would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Royston.I did enjoy your alegorical verse you've so expresively penned.
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Date: 12/9/2010 4:25:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Royston. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/8/2010 6:57:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your creative write tonight.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv..
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