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Love Hints

I was trying to be fair
Hiding all my fragile tears
From a man who didn't seem
To notice all my future dreams
Magazines of pretty brides
Tuxes, suits, and fancy ties
Romantic movies on date night
Love songs playing in the night
Pointing out rings in the store
A man I will always adore
Oblivious to all I want
Even though I've tried to flaunt
Signs on front of his blind eyes
That I want our heartstrings tied
Together for now and always
Maybe adding extra foreplay
Will entice him to begin
A day of really noticing
We were meant for one another
When he's near I start to shudder
With excitement and the joy
Knowing he's my sexy boy
Even though my wedding day
Seemed to never come my way
Until one morning he was there
In his eyes were lots of tears
With a ring and bended knee
He took my hand so shakily
A timid voice and loving speech
Now were lying on the beach
This honeymoon will always last
The hints I gave him in the past
Joined us forever till the end
We'll always be best of friends

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  1. Date: 2/4/2014 4:48:00 PM
    Congrats on the placement here Robin..'

  1. Date: 2/2/2014 10:13:00 AM
    Sometimes us guys are a bit dense *lol* I'm glad you found your Hapily ever after. This was one of my personal favorites for the contest. Well done and congratulations.

  1. Date: 2/1/2014 6:34:00 AM
    Thanks for entering my contest and congrats on your fine win. My next contest is "Husbands are in heaven whose wives scold not", robin

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 3:26:00 PM
    A beautiful touching story....glad he took all those hints you threw his way and may your heartstrings be forever tied. Hugs

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 6:45:00 AM
    Beautiful and heartfelt, with strong emotion, as always. Nicely penned, Sweet Pea <3