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Love Gently Rocked

We sit, relaxed, at closing of the day, you turn, a record on to softly play, then place, fresh logs making our fire enhance, and gently bow asking me for this dance. The song, we’ve loved since we were very young, so often danced with, and so often sung. You sing, so sweetly in my longing ear, and with, strong arms drawing me oh so near. I place, my head upon your shoulder, you spin, us around our humble room, we laugh, just as when we were younger, you stop, to kiss me; then we resume. Such special times like this I feel my heart, could never last if we should ever part. Then shed, a tear by thoughts of losing you, cause you’re, my one and only love so true. Music stops; we stay together, in loves embrace, we melt as one. With fireplace, still gently burning, our fire has only, just begun. Per line: Verses one two and four have ten syllables verse three has nine syllables Verse five has eight syllables Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 12.12.2014 Contest: Rock me Rhythm Poems Sponsor: Sheri Fresonke Harper

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Date: 2/16/2015 12:12:00 AM
Brenda, Nice Rock me around the clock win. ~Skat~
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Date: 2/13/2015 7:55:00 PM
Very romantic! Congrad's on Your Win Light & Love
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Date: 2/13/2015 6:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Brenda ,such a beautiful romantic poem a 7. Blessings Eve miss you
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Date: 2/13/2015 4:39:00 PM
Brenda, stopping back with my congratulations. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/13/2015 2:18:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Brenda:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 2/12/2015 11:46:00 PM
Yours is quite romantic. Just in time for Valentine's Day. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/12/2015 9:29:00 PM
Brenda, lovely rocking poem, congratulations on your placement, thanks for entering my contest.
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Date: 1/13/2015 8:03:00 AM
Love the melts, love that rhymes is Love that heals. Thank you Brenda!!!
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Date: 1/4/2015 6:31:00 PM
Brenda, a beautiful poem enjoyed. Rated 7 - Verlena
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Date: 12/31/2014 11:25:00 AM
Brenda, so lovely! Humble love is the best and truest kind, I feel.
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Date: 12/17/2014 4:18:00 AM
so softly romantic Brenda great pen gl in contest hugs 7
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/17/2014 7:20:00 AM
Thank you Shadow.
Date: 12/16/2014 3:43:00 PM
Excellent job!I hope this does well for you in the contest.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/16/2014 4:08:00 PM
Thanks Maurice.
Date: 12/15/2014 1:19:00 PM
Great write. Merry Christmas from the Eastman's, Dragon, Grandpa Troll, the kids and yes... even Hubby.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/16/2014 4:08:00 PM
Thanks Carol.
Date: 12/15/2014 11:12:00 AM
I am gently rocked by the rhythm of romance! Well done, Brenda!! Hugs, Rhonda
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/16/2014 4:09:00 PM
Thanks so much Rhonda.
Date: 12/14/2014 8:50:00 PM
Wow, I feel the heat on this one -- fire love!! Outstanding my dear friend. You are the best.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/14/2014 9:29:00 PM
Thank you so much David.
Date: 12/14/2014 3:28:00 PM
So beautiful and warm.this is ,just like your heart sweet lady !Charma
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/14/2014 3:58:00 PM
Thanks so much Charmaine.
Date: 12/14/2014 12:20:00 PM
Simply beautiful Brenda...hugs Tim
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/14/2014 12:29:00 PM
Thanks Tim.
Date: 12/14/2014 12:12:00 PM
Wow, Brenda...simply beautiful and so romantic. This will do extremely well in the contest! 7+Fav...Hugs, Sandra
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/14/2014 12:29:00 PM
I hope it does Sandra. Thank you so much for your kind support.
Date: 12/14/2014 9:49:00 AM
Well, aren't you amazing, Brenda. Yes...It rocked me too...gentle, smoothly, and oh so beautiful. Hugs...May the love last and last.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/14/2014 12:28:00 PM
Thank you Eileen.
Date: 12/14/2014 9:46:00 AM
so beautiful and romantic Brenda - good luck:-) hugs Jan xx
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/14/2014 12:27:00 PM
Thank you Jan. XOXO
Date: 12/14/2014 8:20:00 AM
Wow Brenda i' m impressed dear friend! Very beautiful and lovingly romantic! A 7 for you! I really hoped you enjoyed the dance. Very cozy looked indeed. :) Have a lovely Sunday! Good luck in contest! Love and hugs! Xxx D.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/14/2014 12:27:00 PM
Thank you so much Dorian.
Date: 12/14/2014 8:01:00 AM
such touching sweet write Brenda.. :)! wow! I wish I could have someone whom I can have such moments with.. :)! Happy Holidays.. :)!
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