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Love defined There is not much to love, when it’s defined With material things it looks aligned. Should love at all need a prop Which fails at times and love flops. Making the once enshrined the most maligned. 01/sept/12 S.Jagathsimhan Nair. For: SKAT's Define Love contest

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Arthur Charles Ford

Date: 9/15/2012 2:51:00 AM

"love defined",i like it, a real "truism"!! check me out at:www.thepoetbandcompany.yolasite.com(click on guidelines,see my "bio.,thanks) wewuvpoetry@hotmail.com arthur.c. ford

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2012 3:38:00 PM

cute limericking!! Congrats on your win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/6/2012 9:02:00 AM

congrats Jag on a great win with words defining love so well .. luv .. hope u r well .. I am trying to bounce back but my hands are so bad right now ..

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/6/2012 5:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Jag xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/5/2012 7:12:00 PM

JAg , congratulations, in the " Define Love! " contest.. Enjoyed all winners.. xox~pd

Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/5/2012 6:34:00 PM

Wise limerick and a WINNER! You are right with this theme...keep love simple!! Congrats, Jaggy. Hope your spiritual journey this week was enjoyable for u and your loved ones! :) Hope u returned home safely! g.

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/5/2012 10:10:00 AM

congrats on this wonderful winner. a very clever poem, so well written.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/5/2012 7:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in SKAT's "Define Love" contest Jag. Love, Carol

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 9/4/2012 8:32:00 PM

Interesting and thought provoking write Jag....congrats on your win! Hugs

Skat A

Date: 9/4/2012 6:04:00 PM

JAGATHSIMHAN, Congrats in my contest. Thank you for the support~SKAT

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/4/2012 3:29:00 AM

a most reflective write... love is intangible, jag.. much enjoyed with winning huggs!..:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/3/2012 10:46:00 AM

A real good poem Jag. And a lovely "little lady" on your photo. Have a great new week. - Wish you luck in contest. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/3/2012 10:07:00 AM

Interesting approach to the contest Jag, enjoyed it.. All the best for the contest ;)

Richard Palmer

Date: 9/3/2012 8:59:00 AM

good entry,good luck Jag

Cindy Cayton

Date: 9/2/2012 11:43:00 AM

a good lymerick. Thanks for sharing it! Cindy

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/2/2012 8:59:00 AM

such an honest and lovely praise for that one special thing called love, jag.. winning huggs!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/2/2012 7:41:00 AM

No props should be needed like fancy rings, expensive gifts,...this is filled with wisdom and has a strong flow..."Break a Leg" in the contest! (Means good luck!) The Avatar of Dot looks smashing, I think you'll agree. What a precious little pic of the Tricycle Princess! gwendolen

S.Jagathsimhan Nair
Date: 9/2/2012 8:32:00 AM

Rings and gifts and such stuff are not props..it has to do with deeper, wider things..

Robert Pettit

Date: 9/1/2012 12:03:00 AM

Looks like a good limerick for the contest.

Kash Poet

Date: 8/31/2012 11:51:00 PM

Very good Limerick on Love here Jag!Best wishes to you.

Stephen Parker

Date: 8/31/2012 8:22:00 PM

Nice, philosophical treatise on love. Love is, indeed, immaterial! It is heartfelt! Enjoyed your poem!