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Love At First Sight

Your eyes bore into mine, Set them on fire, And now I'm blind. Your soul hit first light, It cast away shadows of the night. Hands touch, Exchanging smiles, We smutch the rope On the candle recoil. Melting heart blaze Going to and fro in haze. Our world ignite, Crackling sounds service, and I cannot be more amazed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/30/2010 7:20:00 AM
A love story you give us Qui so heartfelt. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/30/2010 6:42:00 AM
You have expressed your passionate thoughts of love with good images, Qui
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