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Love 9

Caught on the unever grounds of submission With a never ending option of segression Talking about the differences of evil and good Walking among man learning as I should Memories of ancient Egypt and it's wood Vibrent obcarities at the mention of your name Violent observations and from with they came Fighting over rotted ruins and pegs for a game Carring over obsecurities of a famous dame Locked into eternitiy left on what remains

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Rachel St.Cross

Date: 10/15/2012 12:55:00 PM

* I Really Love This Depthful Intriguing Reflection I Might Say, Amazing Sweet Beautiful Ruth Courtney. Muy Magnifico. Mi Amore, Rachel *

Courtney Courtney
Date: 10/15/2012 8:41:00 PM

many thank yous Rachel your compliments are going to swell my head.

Justin Bordner

Date: 8/23/2012 5:58:00 PM

I like the detached sentiment from "walking among man as I should..." - as if you are describing an ancient conflict - evokes thoughts of Isis - thank you my oracle - J.A.B. %

Courtney Courtney
Date: 9/11/2012 11:34:00 PM

it's about loves journey across generations, God's blessings of the love and memories held over actions and taken to God

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 7/30/2012 7:35:00 AM

Very very interesting piece here...smiles..enjoyed!!!

Courtney Courtney
Date: 7/30/2012 10:35:00 PM

I like interesting