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love 9

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love 9

Caught on the unever grounds of submission
With a never ending option of segression
Talking about the differences of evil and good
Walking among man learning as I should

Memories of ancient Egypt and it's wood
Vibrent obcarities at the mention of your name
Violent observations and from with they came
Fighting over rotted ruins and pegs for a game

Carring over obsecurities of a famous dame
Locked into eternitiy left on what remains

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  1. Date: 10/15/2012 12:55:00 PM
    * I Really Love This Depthful Intriguing Reflection I Might Say, Amazing Sweet Beautiful Ruth Courtney. Muy Magnifico. Mi Amore, Rachel *

    Courtney Avatar Ruth Courtney
    Date: 10/15/2012 8:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    many thank yous Rachel your compliments are going to swell my head.
  1. Date: 8/23/2012 5:58:00 PM
    I like the detached sentiment from "walking among man as I should..." - as if you are describing an ancient conflict - evokes thoughts of Isis - thank you my oracle - J.A.B. %

    Courtney Avatar Ruth Courtney
    Date: 9/11/2012 11:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    it's about loves journey across generations, God's blessings of the love and memories held over actions and taken to God
  1. Date: 7/30/2012 7:35:00 AM
    Very very interesting piece here...smiles..enjoyed!!!

    Courtney Avatar Ruth Courtney
    Date: 7/30/2012 10:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I like interesting