Love

I am living For the one on whom I'm dying

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Audrey Haick

Date: 1/24/2013 4:24:00 PM

Profound write, Mohammad. It tugs at the heart...simply beautiful! Hope all is well, my friend. Love, Annalise

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 1/27/2013 12:14:00 PM

Your comments on my Senryu is incredible, Annalise. Thanks

Maria Cecilia San Juan

Date: 1/22/2013 9:00:00 AM

This is a tear jerker...it strucked me...nice one.

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 1/27/2013 11:53:00 AM

Thanks for your incredible comments on my Senryu, Maria

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/16/2013 10:34:00 AM

It's the small diamonds that is the most beautiful Mohammad ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 1/27/2013 11:26:00 AM

Thanks for your profound comments on my Senryu, Anne

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/16/2013 10:29:00 AM

Nice....................... xx

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 1/25/2013 1:59:00 PM

Thanks Mandy for visiting my Senryu and for your kind words about it

Tim Ryerson

Date: 1/13/2013 12:32:00 PM

So much said in so few words, Mohammad...looking forward to reading more of your poetry - Tim

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 1/22/2013 12:25:00 PM

Thanks for your admiration, Tim. I am grateful

Richard Palmer

Date: 1/12/2013 4:58:00 PM

wonderful,deep,spiritual,great write Mohammad

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 1/22/2013 12:20:00 PM

Thanks for your appreciation, Richard

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 1/12/2013 1:17:00 PM

This really gave me a jolt when I thought about the depth of what must have been in your mind when you wrote this. Much passion in so few words. Re: botox for my back; It might have helped improve but not cure as some days are bad but I have a tiny machine that uses magnetism which is working beautifully. I leant it to my daughter for stomach pain and relief has come for her too. Didn't cost much either!

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 1/18/2013 8:14:00 AM

Thank you so much for your touching comments, Elizabath. It is gratifying to know that botox has worked towards relief of your back pain. Also the tiny machine you bought has also been helpfull. I pray for your total cure. Love. -Mohammad

Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 1/10/2013 12:13:00 AM

Beautiful!

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 1/18/2013 7:49:00 AM

Thanks for your appreciation, Vasna. I am grateful

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/6/2013 3:22:00 PM

I like this one, and guess what? I FOUND you on FB. And I saw how you showed my poem over there. Thanks so much. That was very sweet of you! You will have to accept my friend request because I still did not have you on my friends list.

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 1/14/2013 1:51:00 PM

Thanks for your appreciation of my Senryu. I have just returned from Islamabad to Karachi after attending a Two Day International Conference of Writers and Intellectuals organized by the Pakistan Academy of Letters. I'll soon place some photos of the Conference on my face book. I have already accepted your Friend Request. I'll do so again or initiate a Friend Request myself. Love