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Love, mum

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Love, mum

who decides..
who gets lies..
and who gets the girl..
because my suggestion box is full..
and truthfully speaking..
a two-story house is too close to the sun for my liking..
but i dont mean it the way you think..
i just have a bone to pick..
but my dog is starving..
heads down..
tails up..
its a half confession..
the rest is forth coming attraction..
in traction of seduction skills i've acquired over the years..
whilst dodging humble old man as they are ferried to their graves..
oh God, this story ends..
but i am not in the end..
though i intend to see it till the end..
so i hide my shadows in dark places..
drinking risk-free ice-tea..
as the moon shines over my shoulders..
and for what its worth, i will bring you that star..

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  1. Date: 7/3/2012 8:52:00 AM
    Muhammad welcome to the soup, a great dedication...David

  1. Date: 6/29/2012 1:26:00 PM
    Welcome to the soup. Peace and blessings.

  1. Date: 6/29/2012 6:26:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Muhammad. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/29/2012 2:27:00 AM
    Lovely written poem for your mum. - oxox Anne-Lise

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    Date: 6/29/2012 2:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for reading my poem..I am new to this site..and i am not a professional writer but i would like to learn and if you can assist, i will greatly appreciate it..Thanks