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Louder

Let me hear your words, And Let them fill me like written secrets in a book. So natives of this earth will look, At me and see your visions of a better world. Let me hear your words of peace, A little bit louder. So your voices can be my voice, Like sounds of water flowing out of a caves’ lips. Let me hear your words, Get louder and louder, And louder, so they can drown out this world’s transgressions. Let your wishes slip out this magicians, Wand and transform this world into an Eden.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/13/2010 5:54:00 PM
Thank you Deborah
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Date: 1/13/2010 1:48:00 PM
"Like sounds of water flowing out of a caves’ lips" wonderful line! Light & Love
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Date: 1/13/2010 12:23:00 PM
Thank you Carol
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Date: 1/13/2010 4:57:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Guy-Adler. Please continue to share your writing with us. I wish you the best with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/13/2010 2:21:00 AM
thank you very much marty
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Date: 1/12/2010 6:03:00 PM
Very nice poem...enjoyed...Marty
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