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Lottery Tickets--From Buying To Selling

There once was a crazy man called Calvin spent a lot of money for jackpot win but it was his bad luck soon became a bankrupt started selling tickets for a living! ============================ Placement:9th;(January 2012) Contest:Lottery Ticket Limerick Sponsor:Susan Burch By:kashinath karmakar

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Date: 1/22/2012 9:15:00 PM
HEy, I don't think I ever congratulated you on this one, Kash. That gives me something to say tonight with not a new poem except the one I already saw of yours this morning. Joe had to go back out tonight, so I can catch up here!!
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Date: 1/16/2012 8:33:00 PM
Congrats, Kash. Great limerick. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 1/16/2012 3:31:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Kash! Love, Kim
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Date: 1/16/2012 11:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Susan Burch's "Lottery Ticket Limerick" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/16/2012 7:57:00 AM
Kash, congrats on your win..David
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Date: 1/16/2012 7:06:00 AM
congratulations
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Date: 1/15/2012 2:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Elizabeth
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Date: 1/15/2012 12:55:00 PM
congrats Kash on a top ten victory for this lottery Limerick my friend..luv..
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Date: 1/13/2012 9:44:00 AM
hahaha, such an irony. I enjoyed this much, Kash.
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Date: 1/10/2012 8:46:00 PM
Cute limerick...laughing !! That would be my luck !! Enjoyed !!
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Date: 1/10/2012 8:15:00 PM
oh this is heelarious, kashi... winning bet here with good luck!.:) huggs
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Date: 1/9/2012 9:51:00 PM
I checked out your new favorite poet, VERY nice, Kash. And hey, is this your baby picture??
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Date: 1/9/2012 2:26:00 PM
LOL, love it! Many congrats on your wins too, my friend : ) Is that a baby Kash in the pic?
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Date: 1/9/2012 2:50:00 AM
Good irony Kash. All the best in the contest. Thanks for your congrats on Gifts given, Gifts Received Contest.
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Date: 1/8/2012 11:05:00 PM
Oh...my gosh.... Kash... Youll never believe me...I was gonna change my avatar to the one you have... Lol... Only cause of my sadness.. And I remember and have this picture from an old soup face book page... Lol...great minds think alike...( or libras for that matter )...lol...sadly you think faster...lol... I hit the jackpot of smiles when I opened yhis limerick... Good luck in the contest... Pd
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Date: 1/8/2012 8:43:00 PM
COOL LESSON TO LEARN KASH IN THESE WORDS.. GOOD LUCK IN CONTEST.. EVEN LOTTERY CAN BE ADDICTIVE.. OH..
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Date: 1/8/2012 5:31:00 PM
That is why almost all convenience stores sell lottery tickets. I often fold my hands with palms touching each other and say "namaste" when I enter those places. Good limerick, Kash.
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Date: 1/8/2012 9:24:00 AM
perfect timing in this one, kash. I checked out the poet u referred me to. I'll soup mail ya later. This is a fabulous limerick. Full circle approach to his life. Gwendolen
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Date: 1/7/2012 9:46:00 PM
Nice and practical one, read now. I have seen in my town one man like Calvin. Thanks for your comment on my write. bl
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Date: 1/6/2012 6:54:00 PM
another good one for the contest Kash! Trying to find your poem 'Talk To Me', can you tell me in what page it is? And yes! you're the first one who get it, Khamush in my poem is always referring to Silence, a guru on its own. Thank you so much for your visit and your comments on my poems, it's an honor ~.~
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Date: 1/6/2012 6:57:00 PM
ah, my avatar is a dragon from fluff friends
Date: 1/6/2012 8:24:00 AM
Oh this is so clever as well as funny, excellent limerick. good luck. harry
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Date: 1/5/2012 9:32:00 PM
I liked the irony of the ending of this, Kash. SElling the tickets for the very thing that bankrupted him! Let me know if I am still missing seeing some poems of yours!!
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Date: 1/5/2012 5:41:00 PM
Well it's not the worst thing that could happen, lol. Good luck in the contest!~Tirzah~
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Date: 1/5/2012 12:25:00 PM
You can't win if you don't get in - but putting in too much gets you poor in a rush. Nice Limerick Kash. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/5/2012 12:25:00 PM
Wonderful write Kash! That's what will happen to some people if they keep playing the lottery more and more...they will keep losing until all their money is gone! Sad really! Oh sure, those that play responsibly don't run into this problem, it's those that don't know when to stop that run into problems!! Great poem! Awesome Work!!
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