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Lost Value 
The sun coughed 
a blob of mucus flew out 
landed on a mountain top
 set it afire, 
and for miles, total devastation.
Rain cooled the mountain,
shrouded it in steam,
when the mist cleared 
a sparkling diamond of a mountain.
Overnight the price of gems fell 
valueless now. 
No good for anything other 
than as underlay for motorways
and garden paths.       

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  1. Date: 3/11/2013 7:59:00 AM
    "A blob of mucous" You are such a romantic.

    hansen Avatar jan oskar hansen
    Date: 3/11/2013 11:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ok...a dash of perfume,,,no?