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Lost Valentine

Her pain was unbearable* Desperation overwhelmed her being She amassed as much courage as she could and Fervently prayed She supplicated the divine for strength for to Heal her wounds that were afflicted upon her heart By The insensitivity of a man just before Valentine's, Incessantly she prayed love in life to find for not Her heart, perpetually, suffer Her prayers, incense of virtuous thoughts, ascended The heavens, Became celestial dew that turned into tears of Supplication, God witnessed her drama and the sincerity of her plea Thus An angel downwards at once He sent the torch of hope In her heart to rekindle Thus Consolation in the arms of awaiting love, her to find! © Demetrios Trifiatis 07 FEBRUARY 2015 *Dedicated to a young lady that the arrows of cupid have missed her heart!

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Eve Roper

Date: 2/8/2015 9:57:00 AM

Every soul should know the true meaning of love and to be loved. Blessings dear friend Eve

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/8/2015 10:01:00 AM

Thank you my friend, Eve! Certain am I the meaning of love you know!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/8/2015 4:31:00 AM

Incense of virtuous thought....celestial dew....consolation in the arms of awaiting love....my dear poet, these are words of healing and of love. Such a beautiful and wondrous poem you have penned. Your heart is ever loving, ever nurturing, ever believing. This is a poem that must be immortalized...My love and hugs to you.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/8/2015 5:22:00 AM

My dearest poetess, every woman and every man, I would add, deserves to be LOVED! When love is in our hearts, no wounds are possible! May the Good Lord open the gates of love for you to inundate your tender and thirsty for love soul! Thank you for your superlative comment which I hardly deserve! God bless you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/7/2015 11:21:00 AM

- Strong in her faith - A beautiful poem that was touching to read, dear Demetrios - Rating 7 ! - // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/8/2015 5:24:00 AM

Your visit alone is my true reward, dear Anne-Lise, the grading is generous but not important for me. Thank you so much!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/7/2015 8:01:00 AM

I am sure her hearts desire will be answered for she has appealed to the Author of Love. Beautifully expressed my friend Demetrios!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/8/2015 5:27:00 AM

Myself, am sure as well my friend, Richard, for a prayer like this wouldn't never remain unanswered by our Lord! Thank you!

Tim Smith

Date: 2/7/2015 6:39:00 AM

How enchanting. She will find her love

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/7/2015 6:41:00 AM

Yes, Tim, I believe she will and hope that no heart able to love be alone that loving day! Thank you my friend!